DD12HW8 Reflect on Peer Review

Reviewing my peers' reports was helpful because it reminded me of all the checklists we need to use to review and edit our own draft. The first report I read was very technical and wordy, whereas the second report included shorter and more concise paragraphs. I hope to revise my team's draft to make it fall somewhere in between. I also saw a comment on one draft about what needs to be on the Table of Contents- that they can start with the Introduction section. 

There are also a handful of edits and additions we need to make to our report, such as Table of Contents, some sentence structure and wording of paragraphs, and Tip Sheet. Although my peers' Tip Sheets were visually appealing, they were difficult to read. I want to make sure we do not make that same mistake with ours. We also need to make some changes with our bibliography. We need to put our Works Cited/References page in alphabetical order and make sure our references and in-text citations all follow the same format.