DD12HW5 Sentence Analysis

Here is the link to my Sentence Analysis document.


Example One

Before Sentence: Get to know your team.

After Sentence: Learn something about each new team member.

Pattern Used: Substitution helped me revise this sentence by replacing a single word with a word group. I also used modification by adding a modifier (new) to team member.


Example Two

Before Sentence: An online application such as Todoist can help keep tasks organized and allow access to all team members.

After Sentence: A free project management online application, such as Todoist, can help keep tasks organized, and features allow all team members to have access.

Pattern Used: Modification and Subordination helped me revise this sentence by adding modifiers to the subject.